|Reviews for Starlight|
| Cheyenne Kai chapter 2 . 10/31/2005
Interesting and written well to keep me entertained.
| Cheyenne Kai chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
"The pale, sickly moon peered timidly from behind a thatch of clouds in the murky night sky above a small town" This seemed a bit long. I think it was the last phrase. Maybe add a full stop.
"her head turned sharply with every moment to turn in the directions she had neglected to check for a while" I think you write 'turn' too many times.
I agree with the above coment, it is like watching the story, you use atmosphere effectivly.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
wow... almost like i was watching the story, while in the story~~ sorry, not very ariticulate today anyhows~ good work