Reviews for Moon
piuk chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Oh my god, the last paragraph is amazing. I love it!
Hooray chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
You are right, the moon is truly beautiful. During a full moon night, I love going outside to just look at it and the stars. I hate living close to the city, though. I live on a quiet street, but downtown is really close to where I live!

Well, here I am rambling. Onto the review! This is one of my favorite poems. I like the way you describe the moon as something different in each stanza. I imagined the moon as you described it and I couldn't help, but smile.
kayla-lilya chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
wow! that was really beatuiful! is that how you really feel? you are right, the moon is a very strong and beatiful thing.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
pretty the moon, truly inspirational good work!

keep writing!