Reviews for WIthin My Hand
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Sore rememberance... God, how bitter this is, I cannot define it.
account not in use chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
wow. that hurt to read.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
*nods head* ... hi again. this is brilliant, too. again, it's something simple; it just revolves around one idea. but that's all poetry needs, really. and you connect it to a lot more than just an idea of not writing about someone which means you wrote about them anyways, really. the use of parentheses again, is really good. and the way you threw "whore" into the middle of there because suddenly it changes the mood of the poem. hah i feel stupid blabbering on to you. sorry. great writing, though.

k8
S.C.Eboni chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
wow this really impacted me...its really touching, love it

im hoping that this isnt writing from personal experience, but in the case that it is...i empathize. love and anything related to it sucks
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
wow... powerful - *relates*