Reviews for playground dreams
Tikklz chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
Really original. I LOVED IT!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
it touched the heart... so lonely, but not gone, not yet good work

keep writing!
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
There is something very intimate about this one, not to mention inquisitive, and yet, somehow, crystal clear vision is what forged this one.
account not in use chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
wonderful. the feeling is clear, and the content is blinding.
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
aw that's lovely. i love how you break the lines into a pattern with the "To/ See,/" and the "Save/ Me/" etc. and the parts you have in parentheses - brilliant. and the opening line is really powerful. really nice job with this poem - the feeling leeks through the lines, i swear it does.

k8