I like it! I hope you write some more of it...if you haven't, y'know, been killed by some axe weilding maniac. Any other excuse is ...well...inexcusable :P

I like it so far, I hope you update soon-ish... :)

Wow, Ally's cool.

And poor Aiden, going to jump /hugs/

I love the name Paris by the way, it's awesome D

Great chapter, I hope you're planning on updating soon /nudge/

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Phew... i really thought he was gonna jump! scary! i like Ally! she was fun!

Wow, call someone at three AM to say ya got the job! heheh, i would've strangled the guy! lol!

It was a fun read! The rating made me nervous, but it was good!

Okay. Love.

This is fucking BRILL. I love it. LOVE, I say. MORE, I say.

Yes. -ahem-

xD

Cam and Paris. Oh. My god. I love. Yes.

PARIS.

Great first chapter!Your story seems really interesting!I hope you keep writing!You should have more reviews...I want to know what happened to Aiden!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I enjoyed it! Does that count? XD Okay, maybe not...after all, I'm still Morbid Maxwell...A twisted freak...but your story was good! I hope this wasn't the end...and I want another chapter soon...or I'll...I'll think of that and get back to you.

Harlequin~Please fix me...