| Reviews for costume |
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   no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/11/2005 Well, I don't know what to think of that. It seems really random. I don't know if I like it that much. I'm sorry. I usually like your stuff a lot. |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/28/2005 beautiful.. I love the first stanzas |
| Gilee7 chapter 1 . 10/27/2005 Once again, great rhythm. And good . . . imagery? I don't feel that "happy" emotion you talk about in the summary, though. I don't really feel any emotion in this piece. |
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 10/25/2005 Simple and sweet. Brava! |
| Eloquent-Marionette chapter 1 . 10/24/2005 wow, i like the imagry. the rhyme and flow was good too. i liked the last stanza "broken chains/of tensing string/real smiles/and fairy wings" thats really pretty. good job and KW and thanks for the review! ~davida |
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 10/23/2005 This is one of the best rhyming poems i've ever read on this site. I love the imagery you've used here. Living proof, that not all good poetry is written when depressed. Going on my favs. |
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 10/22/2005 rhyming is amazing-it flows so .It'd be a crime if I didn't add it to my faves-honestly,this is just...wow... |
| Jason Daniels chapter 1 . 10/20/2005 coolness. like the way the lines tie in together well done. live on the edge..! #$% |