Reviews for The Destiny I Lived In
Darklight Shadow chapter 14 . 5/26/2006
Errmm.. great chapter.. it's just that there are too many dark protals and it's a little hard for me to keep tract.. Other than that.. this chapter is still very good!
midnightdream-5 chapter 13 . 3/31/2006
OH-My-GOD! u can't leave it there! thats just like mean! lol :D

ok u have to update asap! pwease! lol :D

and dont worry it was worth the wait i love noel lol :D

and the long lost prince eh! didn't she kill him!

katie x

ps GR8 chap! lol :D
Darklight Shadow chapter 13 . 3/19/2006
Errmm.. cool chapter as usual.. I wanna know more about this Prince of Vamps!
midnightdream-5 chapter 12 . 2/10/2006
hey gd chapter! i think it's gd that were seeing her background and that she is learning her mother's past... u did have a few mistakes but no biggy's besides we all make em! lol hope u update soon! :D katie x
Darklight Shadow chapter 12 . 2/8/2006
Hey.. great chapter... well done... and I hope you can put up your next chapter soon!
midnightdream-5 chapter 11 . 1/28/2006
i forgive u - not that theres anything to forgive! it was a great chapter! and u shud sleep more so that i can read more! and wot deal are they goin to make! and how are noel and lemance goin to do? dun dun dun! lol update soon! i really wanna read more! lol :D katie x
Darklight Shadow chapter 11 . 1/27/2006
Hey.. this chapter is quite good! What kind of deal are Michael and the huntress talking about? anyway.. great chapter!
Darklight Shadow chapter 10 . 1/13/2006
So Lemance and Noel are brothers? OMIGOD! That was so unexpected! Great!
midnightdream-5 chapter 10 . 1/12/2006
but, but, but... ok so now i sound like an annoying lil kid. neways... there brothers! i so didn't see that one coming, but i suppose it explains why the lord of elemntal was willing to help a bit more. so shes finally finding out the truth huh? this shall b interestin, and Michael has to be her father - the vampire king. am i right? update soon coz i cant wait! lol :D katie x
midnightdream-5 chapter 9 . 1/10/2006
*cries* ur not updating so soon nemore! now wot im i gonna do! neways it was gd to get this chapter and once again its not bad so stop putting urdelf down! ok so maybe it could have been better but its the same wiv every story some chapters are bound to b better than others. i only hope that u will find inspiration n get all ur homework done so u will do the next chapter that u say will be gd... hmm cant wait! :D lovin noel as always! lol
Darklight Shadow chapter 9 . 1/9/2006
This chapter is great so don't say it's crappy! Where did Jaeris learn to do the plant thing? And what's wrong with that book?
midnightdream-5 chapter 8 . 12/30/2005
hey, i didnt think this chapter was lame. the king of vamps aka jaeris' father was bound to find out sooner n it was bette sooner seen as though he's a vamp so u no he would fnd out quite fast. neways i can kinda see why noel lied to her about where he was but they shud SO get 2getha! lol sry tis just me i love readin story's like that hense mine lol. neways i hope u keep updatin fast n get some more inspiration coz i think its a gd story/plot u just need to keep at it. if not 4 ur sake then 4 mine! lol some gd imaginations btw wiv the whole fanged things lol. katie x
Darklight Shadow chapter 8 . 12/29/2005
Hey.. you updated your story today! Excellent! There are a few grammar mistakes again.. and I know you will be able to spot it if you reread your story! The Noel and Lemance are weird!
midnightdream-5 chapter 7 . 12/20/2005
hey, first things first - *coughs* ur welcome n did i mention that i LOVE Noel! lol. i was a bit confused to begin wiv but then it eventually cloicked (sry im a bit slow 2day), but yet another gd chapter! yay :D cant wait 2 read more. n the stupid darkness elemental (which by the way, is a gd creation on ur behalf), shud so die soon! lol n i vote either Noel or Jaeris to do the job! lol he BETTER not hurt them! aww... oh n i hope u feel better soon, but on the bright side it means u update sooner! yay :D (did i say that out loud?...) katie x
Darklight Shadow chapter 7 . 12/19/2005
What am I going to say? Your story is getting nicer and nicer. It's a good thing that Jaeris got herself another alliance!
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