If I were you, I would try to get used to bitter rejection. It's likely to happen a lot you self aggrandizing drama whore.

A lot of people get rejected, but that doesn't mean they write crap and post it on the internet to get attention from people that they don't even know. The last line ruined it. I might have had a little (but oh, a very little) respect if you hadn't put such a horrible line into it. Raspberry Twirl is a much better poet, but I have to go against her words and say out-right that this was just a basic, not-so-good poem. Stick to bad fiction; it's more fun to flame.'Sux' is spelled 's-u-c-k-s'

-Dynamic Equilibrium

Ah, poor lizzy. You got rejected. HA HA HA HA! I guess you should just give up on your life. Maybe that boy rejected you because you're a bitch and a troll. And the poem sucked too.

And about that "Get a life" thing you said to me. Well at least I don't go around being a bitch and flaming people so I can get attention. Die in a fire you attention-whore bitch.

wow, lizzy, that was WONDERFUL! great ryhming, and the plot was deep, catching, and moving. you should try writing more poetry!

the flow was awesome, something that most other writers can't work into their peices. wow. wow. wow!