|Reviews for Untitled|
| Sunami chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Damn... I feel like I can really relate to this piece. ''
Why pine after something unattainable, when something real and tangible rests at your feet?
And the ambivalence can kill. Oh, hell, can it ever kill. The pain is almost too much. Or perhaps it already is. Like a match, the love can burn... but without something to keep the medium from turning to ashes in the end... there must be something strong and sure to keep it alive. Otherwise the fire WILL die out... and the medium will be destroyed simultaneously.
Walking such a fine line in is never easy-however... in order to survive, one must choose which side to fall into, and decide at last...
I wish you the best of luck, and sorry I suck at giving advice. Or anything.
Beautiful poem, by the way. ;;
| I Think You Know chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
PRETTY! I LOVE IT!