|Reviews for The Eater|
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
I love the last lines. Last two stanzas: so hauntingly good, they leave a taste in the mouth.
Also: "I want her to be in pain". So good. Yes, yes, yes.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
This is the best poem that I've read in my entire life. Honestly. It's brilliant and oh-so gorgeous. The ending is just... perfect. The imagery - unbelievable. I'm in awe.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
the repetiton of the ideas add to the effect. really pretty in that terrible way anorexia is.
| Abortive Measures chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read on this subject (or any subject, for that matter.) Your eloquence and usage of metaphors is astounding.