I love the last lines. Last two stanzas: so hauntingly good, they leave a taste in the mouth.

Also: "I want her to be in pain". So good. Yes, yes, yes.

This is the best poem that I've read in my entire life. Honestly. It's brilliant and oh-so gorgeous. The ending is just... perfect. The imagery - unbelievable. I'm in awe.

the repetiton of the ideas add to the effect. really pretty in that terrible way anorexia is.

This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read on this subject (or any subject, for that matter.) Your eloquence and usage of metaphors is astounding.