Reviews for Seizure
lymli chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
it's a nice description about yourself since it always hard to choose the words.
Pink Plastic Fire chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
...wow!
firesword chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
interesting

I don't normally read poems, but this is good by my standards!

GO NUTZ! yes i'm using your stories for my story for... advertizing! just this one, and i'm sure that no one will see this ever, except the world!

oh yeah, um good, i felt like i had a sizure once, it was short though like you say, and nice poem.

once again i'm not that much of a poem fan so... don't expect this all the time.
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Awesome, i like the one word line,very quick and sudden,like the namesake,good job!
liquid-dreams-139 chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
wow... is that how it really feels? cool... never knew... u shoudlnt be ashamed you know it aint ur fault that u get these seizures... stay healthy! lol stupid thing to say huh?
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Omg wow. Ah the word seizure puts such scary images in my head.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
Brief...but it worked okay here. Not the best poetry I've ready...it would help if you would elaborate just a bit more instead of leaving it up to words. All in all I enjoyed reading this. Keep wriitng.
J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Wow... way to break convention and still be artfull about it. I love the way you did that. Good title, too.