I have a story of my own. It's not very good, but I'm trying. They're all shapeshifter, but only two can take more than 2 shapes. I have 2 Elves, but one is something like the walking dead, having died at age 9. The live one can heal stuff and the dead one is a people shapeshifter. One of the other characters has a split personality, and so changes back and forth every once in a while. He's also a shapeshifter, but with animals. I realise that you probably don't care very much about all this. Gomen ne. there are more characters, but I think this night have bored you enough, so maybe later. no taking of my characters, anyone... s'il vous plait!

Gah! Who is it?

the whole $$ loving thing was completely random... oh well...

Harry Potter and Inuyasha, but much cooler... funnier too...did I mention that I love you?

I love you...

sniff snif... how cute...

and then after the volcano exploded, the islands of hawaii became (in record time) one large island because the amazingly quick hardening of the molten lava, as well as the sheer amount of it, and all the people in hawaii, because of the lack of gravity and force of the volcano, ended up in space with the whale and the bowl of petunias. but one question still remains... how did Khimayri and Letitia survive? ...i guess they were saved by the toilet fairies and the underpants gnomes... get chapter 6 up soon.

Interesting, if somewhat random humour. Well not that random but it makes me pause and wonder... 'where did that come from?'. Um well yea.

Well as everyone else has said, this promises to be interesting and I can't wait till I have time to read the rest. I especially can't wait to chapter 6. Hehe...

ok then! question! closets make noises? since when? i mean there is the occasional fart sound from the guy who stalks you but you know, i'm not really aware of any others. also, is erica gay? she seems to have this obsession with Kara's butt! THAT'S CREEPY! and, does she have a wort on her nose? a wort that talks to her, and gives her creepy ideas and thoughts, thoughts about kara, and her butt. kara's butt. "tomorrow, we're going to touch it." "no! it's better if we stay friends!" "you must give in. it is your destiny." "no! i won't!" "give in to your desires!" "" "you sound like a woodepecker when you do that" "i'm NOT a woodepecker" "wood pecker! woodpecker!" "gr" "the woodpecker has troubles going to the bathroom!" "sh! no one knows that!" "i'm going to tell kara's BUTT!" "no! she'll never think of me the same again!" "because you love her!" "leave me alone!" "CRACKERS!" "what?" "you're a woodpecker" "go away!" "i can't, i'm stuck to your nose!" "NO!"

Hello! you commented on my stories, and I thought I'd read yours! I'm a little new here, you see... so I really appreciate you reviewing my stuff.

So about your story: the story is very entertaining, and well thought-out. Your dialogues are engaging and realistic. It's actually really cute! Good job! Ooh. and I really like your characters' names. :P

constructive criticism... maybe a bit like teenager X-men? It's good nonetheless. Not everything has to be absolutely original.

this just keeps getting better! i hope that you are able to update soon, and that you defeat writers block!

Hahaha... yeah, Jimmy must be tired after the first four chapters. Anyway, to all other readers- READ MY FRIKIN STORIES, I HAVE SELF-ESTEEM LEVELS THAT ARE ONLY SLIGHTLY HIGHER THAN THE AVERAGE SUICIDAL PERSON, I NEED YOU TO BOOST MY CONFIDENCE OR I WILL KILL MYSELF! It felt so good to finally say that. Now back to my pathetic life...

It's funny. The part to do with the crazed janitor, and also the part where Nicholai turned into a giant snail and got pepper and salt thrown on him.

Kara seems pretty popular. Maybe a bit overly popular. No offence or anything but that is just my opinion. But hey, she is a new girl and basically new girls are quite popular at first...

GWAHAHAHAHAHA! ...the only bad thing about knowing everything that's going to happen is that i can't blab about it over reviews. Oh well. At least i know for myself. anyway, see ya! -Nuriel

Another nice chapter. It's definitely interesting. Well that's kind of obvious since I wouldn't be bothered reading and reviewing if it wasn't. I'll end the review here before I start stating any more of the obvious.