Nice. Please review mine, anyone reading here. I'm really depressed right now and need cheering up.

well..it's interesting, i must say, i'm interested in what this interesting story may become..possibly interesting you might say. at any rate, Nikki sounds like a girl name! why? because it is...even though it's also a boy name...but it sounds girly. anyways, i also think that kara has issues with mugs. i don't know why. but she seems the character. the kind of person that when in the presence of a coffee mug, is ready to scream bloody hell and scamper out the door which results in flipping over a chair and getting a giant gash on her leg, then realzing that the mug has fallen off the table, handle has been broken off while falling, and is rolling towards her! with this, kara screams louder than jupitar on a bad gas day and jumps out the window like a suicidal! eventually she realizes that she has fire powers and tries shooting the mug to smitherines, but unfortunatly, she sets her hair on fire. she does this while she's falling from a very high story building (however hight the school is) so then, she lands in the dumpster, the pickup truck comes and picks her up, she gets sent to the dumpster and is ironically dumped in the pile with all the broken mugs. she runs faster than, yet again, jupitar on a bad gas day, all the way back to the school, but because she's going so fast she doesn't realize that the school is approaching and she then runs into the wall and falls unconcious for 5 years..er...2 days...uh...2 seconds. then she wakes up and out the window falls the original coffee mug (which has been rolling across the floor for quite some time now) and is falling towards her, when all of a sudden...sorry, i have to go do homework, i'll tell you the rest in my next review (that was all completly improvising! but i seriously have to go. i'll continue after you send the next chapter!)

i think these chapters need to shorter.

this is really good, but it seems kind of like a harry potter rip-off. whatever. it's really good, so i hope you update soon.

Good job Doritos... that's awesome. Can't wait until the rest is posted. I can't believe you based a character (Aviar) on me, you rock!

Seems great so far.