While I'm sad that there's only one chapter left in this, I'm happy thet you're writing a sequel. Speaking of the sequel...it's going to be about Damarcus, isn't it?

OO! Plotful stuff! And dead people! and a ROCKING realization! and a funny author's note! (the one about Aww... made me think of this one time when a bunch of guys got up on a table and mooned everybody in the cafeteria...)

XD CD

yay i look like msha in my grad suit. and to drive bailey mad i might just grow my hair out for it. oh and if you dare try to kiss me then your lips will be ripped off. that goes for hugging and arms and ect. I DIED AGAIN! and what were you saying earlier about me and nicholi... if you dare even think about it...

that was completely awesome! i loved it

Excellent... I marry Brendan. Score. Next book, if there's a character like me, can I have a guy based on Matthew Lombardi? Please?

k, i just thought of something, first kara was dating satoru, and then suddenly she dates jinsai, no offense, but she's kinda slutty, either that or she didn't care about satoru that much, either that or she was cheating on him with jinsai, sorry, i just need to mention that. also, now, don't take this as a flame, i just need to mention that usually, the whole plot of the story with the conflict and what not happens NOT 5 chapters before the ending, remember la class? plot diagrams? *shudders in fear*, well, just thought you should know, just keep that in mind for the next story. moving on, STOP STEALING PEOPLES QUOTES! seriously! first you stole my with...cherriesaregood or soemthing i'm not sure, and i'm STILL very mad about that! and then you stole the pie line from legendary frog, and you also stole our "strange noises no man should ever hear" line, k, it's still plagerism if you change a few words, think of la class, she always says "don't plagerize, you'll get in lots of trouble," and then she plagerizes every single worksheet she gives us...but anyways. i swear i will sue you when we're older! STOP DOING IT! alright, i let off some steam, i'm good now. SO! what's up? cheese? greatQ q, is a funny letter, like in letter writeing. ew letter writing, WHY DOES EVERYTHING ALWAYS GO BACK TO LA CLASS! I'M GOING TO DIE! AAHA.A.A.A..A.A.A.. ABCDEFG, now i know my 1,2,3 joy. what? i need to go die now, bye!

i am still dead and why the hell did you make so me and you went on a ! #$%& date that infurated (but mari is hot so i'm happy) but still, icy does she really have an explosion dress for our grad. if so hug lotn multple times and if not... well hug him to death anyways.(my mother was a goddess. well are you? no... then leave.) by the way can my son meet his mother? i would really like to have a bit of her rub off on him.

Nice, the dads fighting... you described the dresses and stuff really well. Loved that chapter, can't wait for the next!

*cracks up*

I love.

:) CD

Luck luck luck

HURRY UP ALREADY... and yeah its sweet bananas and turkey... infact I am eating turket right now... so yeah hurry up with chapter 16 and tell van twelve order chap 11 had better get up soon

the spoons have made a comeback from along time ago and i am very those who don't know flaming personally it was along time ago and she had a very interesting comedy/horror in which a man is killes by spons and that was strange except for the fact that it was. the next endevor was known as eye of fire and that included quite a few of us in very messed up situations. this split up and we all went our seperate ways. flaming and dinuriel went to write the succsessful fictions that you are reading at the moment. i went and wrote some fan fics(including a couple of very *ahem* yaoi fics) and we are still all working but if you are ever surfing just look out for the attack of the cyber coffee mug sharks.

i hate you, first you stole my aromafresh line, even though you changed it, YOU'RE NOT ALOWED TO DO THAT! I FORBID YOU! i you ever do it again, i'll eat you. also, i hate kara and jinsai, they snuggle too much, and why were they snuggling if they didn't even know that the other one LOVED them. e.e.e. .w.w.w. , i though jinsai knew that nikolai loved kara, so that was kind of pointless adding that in. i dont' think nicholai should've loved her if you're going to make jinsai love her. anyhoo, because of your traitorous acts of making icky love scenes and stealing my divider of word thing...(aromafresh) i shall give you a short review. oh BURN!

HURRAH FOR JINSAI/KARA! HURRAH FOR AVIAR/SAKAKI! HURRAH FOR AARON/GYMNOSPERM! HURRAH FOR... well, I guess I can't say that yet, can I? Post chapter 15 soon!

I love it I love it I love it. FEA-style truth or dare, AND fluff!

And Mr. Gymnosperm's pants on fire! Which is forever and always amusing.

hee.

:D CD