Reviews for I Take It Too Seriously
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I love this poem for its simplicity - there is no over-use of terms, no overtly flowery prose. Which is refreshing, most definitely. I also loved the feel of this poem - ugh! I sound so stupid! I liked the way it inspired this kind of saddened, weary bitterness within me, because I could relate with the protagonist and it made me sad. Sorry, I'm not in my element. I'm really tired, but I thought I should review this poem to do it justice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
I love that last stanza.
lacking motivation chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
pretty last lines.
Eboniccinderella chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
I like the last three lines and how you seperated them from the rest of the shows their importance.
Obsidian Eyes chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Deep and thought provoking