|Reviews for Tis a Light in the Darkness|
| The Red Queen04 chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
I love the phrase "‘Tis a light in the darkness" and how you seem to be trying to break it. "Days of that which is hell" I'm not sure what you want to say here. I would suggest that you clarify your position in reference to the phrase "a light in the darkness." What is it that you want your audience to get out of your poem?