Reviews for Jesus thou art my savior
Asenka.N.Chernyaeva chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Hmm... I liked! I liked the repetition in the first line of every stanza. It was succinct, which is always a plus. It reminded me somewhat of one of my Gospel Choir songs. I didn't like the ending only on principle, because though I am not an atheist, I am very non-religious. Hmm! Good job!
maxnotevoltage chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
An awesome expression to God. Excellent poetry! -
Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
I like the last line best, not sure why though. Most likely it's because i don't have God. *shrug* oh well Great wrtie! Peace, Jessi
Needa S chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
True! Awesome write. God Bless and keep'em coming.

Needa S.
SCAREDYcatSCRIBBLER chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
short but SWEET! Maybe a bit more description bout your feelins! But I love it!