Reviews for The Canvas
The Gobbler chapter 2 . 11/17/2005
Cool, cool... I liked the way Rhapsody woke up, and I also liked the dialogue at the end. Your character development is also really good... I can picture what both Willis and Rhapsody's personalities are like.
The Gobbler chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
THis sounds incredibly cool! The idea for this story is great, and this chapter is written really well. The part about the black tear confused me a bit, though. However, I absolutely loved the ending. Great job.