Reviews for Ashes to Ashes: The Story of a Revolutionary
Fuifse chapter 3 . 1/2/2006
Errg! You have to finish or at least continue your stories: they're good. You've sucked me, the reader, into the story to the point where I feel like I'm the character. You're good at that. The characters and the story itself is anything but flat. Your stories could use a quick-over edit by yourself, but the story itself is wonderful. Keep at it! :)
JaveHarron chapter 3 . 10/31/2005
Cool perception on Ellis's part!
JaveHarron chapter 2 . 10/26/2005
Okay, some grammatical stuff so far, but nice to see this on . I take it Charlotte is later taken by the Kaiser?
Skyrunner chapter 2 . 10/25/2005
Nice. A few grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing serious. Your story flows very well, making it easy to read, and it seems like you actually put some effort into it. Good luck on future installments.