Reviews for Ahiko no Taiikukan/ Ahiko Gym |
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![]() ![]() Wow this si really cool. Your s pretty good writer! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really hard to follow, with the changing perspectives and appearing/ vanishing characters. With a little revision, though, this could be really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee, hee, hee... that was good :-) I could see it as anime :-) Nice job... a bit hard to read because of formatting and grammar, though. |