|Reviews for Third Chapter|
| Rehio chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Ah life, always worth commenting on. It's a subject that can never be overly discussed, and I think you did a good job showing what it means in your way. I really like the thoughts that this poem conveys, and I know I'm probably repeating myself, but I like the fact that I can read this and take something new that I hadn't thought about just from having read this.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
Very simple, straightforward. Heartfelt. Good job. Eh, one thing. You spelled "part" as "port" in the... 9th line I think.
Anway, yeah. Keep writing! But then again, I don't need to tell you that.