Reviews for if it's a balance or a dive
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
This is crazy beautiful in a way I can't really describe. I like it. A lot.
Roth Jopalse Sammuels chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
As writers of free verse know, I tend to dislike they're work when it is simple, and practically fall in love with it when it is brilliant, like this peice. The reason is because I've never stepped into the realm of free verse, as it is so much harder to write, or so it would seem. Having a format always seems to make the words flow better.

But after reading this poem and your last poem, I see how brilliantly you manage this poetry. I'm amazed. Impressed. I love your work.

Another favorite.

Keep writing.
account not in use chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
wow. you've shocked me. the brutal honesty in this is enough to mkae a person stop breathing. wonderful.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
I like it; its abstract and disjointed but well detailed. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.