Reviews for Tell Me Something Happy
hidden sapphire chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
wow. This has put into words what I've wanted to say but couldn't. You wrote beautifully and I can tell it was heart-felt.
pointythings chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
This is really sweet; I like the line structure. There are a couple of strange line breaks; I think you might change "The love that/You tell me you have" to "The love/That you tell me you have." But I really like some of the imagery, especially the line about "show me the stars." I also like "once upon a times."I think you might find a more creative way to put "Remind me why the pain is worth living through;" it sounds kind of cliched that , lovely poem overall. See you!Yours in writing, ~pointythings~
LadyVerse chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
that was really good. you have great metaphors and i love your rhythm -thanks for your review. slam poetry is poetry that is performed, kind of like rap in some cases, but with no music. just the words.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I loved the play on detail in this; how it evolved.