WRITE. I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. The capital letters are neccessary. This is as realistic as I've ever read, just plain amazing. So Write More. As soon ar you read this.

What I am I reading? I love it. You deserve an award.

WHAT! NO MORE STORY?!

This is so, so funny, you really need to finish this.

While I'm a little disappointed that this story seems to have been discontinued, I loved it and how you made it look like our computers are part of an entire secret community on the Internet. I loved IT!

Darn. I was hoping there was more. Please, if you ever get the slightest urge to even pursue this again, don't hesitate to do so! One of the best concepts for stories that I've read on the internet ever, and definitely one of the most enjoyable and emotion-evoking ones I've read, both on paper and on the internet.

But... how can you just leave it there? D:

Yeah, I know, story untouched for four years will probably never be finished. But I loved every word of what you wrote anyways.

Oh, dear. I just blasted through this entire thing and there's no more? I love this! It's geekalicious; one of the best, most original ideas I've seen in a long time.

Bwahahaha, this is hilarious! :D Computer love... literally.

You're a genius.

Wow, I read this so long ago, and I found it again when I was on the NaNoWriMo forums.

Hey! This is great. It's well written, informed and error-free. Hooray for good fiction!

And as an Alienware owner, I'd like to say you've done the computer justice.

Thank you!

~Angela

This IS geeky. But it's funny. I LOVE it, although I don't have time to read the whole thing.

Wow...this is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. I sense creative talent...

Bwaha, this is hysterical. So brilliant and unique. Ha, the whole networking thing, besides sounding a little kinky, *ahem* was very creative. Just the whole idea of using computers like that is genius. You must be very good with your technology, and clever too, the way you can twist those technological words around to replace the regular words and make them have the same meaning. You made me think of the firewall like a condom and computer viruses as STDs. Didn't think that would ever happen, haha.

Odd. Maybe PC could tell Mac why Alienware was so bad. Oh, lok at me, advising computors.

Sensual computoring! Oh!. A really great start.