Reviews for Where Do the Children Play
Icey Yun chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
That is a very good reason, I am pro-choice. I believe if you want to you should but that doesn't mean I like it. It is sad to think this happens, but people are to damn prejudice to see past their big noses to understand what you stated about those being actual people. It's their choice why would they want to force anything but that on them? Oh well, I suppose I might learn later. Happy writing.
NaiRomajin chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I really do like the fact that in an issue you might have conflicting views in, you choose to take the side you might not be 100% comfortable with. That shows for the story, I think it is good. The main problem I have with it is this part: "Amy enters her office and pulls her long black hair out of its clasp at the nape of her neck. It falls down her back and she closes her eyes."It portrays her in a very determined, end-of-her-rope manner, when I think it is simply too early for than that and a few small errors here and there, me likey. 3