Reviews for Crushed
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
I like this.. the format is really cool and the title adds a whole different level.. nice job
smile persephone chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
I love the style. It creates a flow that's just so natural. The imagery is vivid, but blurred around the edges like a dream sequence. I'm not one for one word endings, but this worked nicely.