|Reviews for I Love You|
| Calliope Veronica chapter 1 . 12/1/2005
"You take my pain away, you make me smile. Do you care about me? Do I matter at all to you?"
I like that part...
sometimes I go through stages with my boyfriend were I think he's too good for me, and that he couldn't possibly love me. I've thought similiar thoughts such as what you wrote in this poem, but probably less dramatic, because I have better self esteem this year than last year. _;
.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.
ps. hey, thanks for reviewing not only one, but 2 of my poems! that made my day bunches!
| Confused-Mind chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
this is a really pretty song and I like it a lot. Actually describes some feelings I have right now. I was also wondering if you'd mind if I show a few of my friends some of your work, because I'm trying to get them into fictionpress and your a wonderful writer.
| Catherine Abellanosa chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
wow! you're a good composer! great work! honestly, it touched me though i don't have a sense of romance in me..
great work! keep it up!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
i dont really like this.. it seems like multiple ideas all crammed in one.. suicide, unrequited love, cheating... its jus too much for me.. I love hte chorus though
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
I love the line 'Please don't tell me you don't care, I might die if you do' Very powerful piece you have here, I can relate to it a lot!
Much love, Rosanna.
| blackrosestears chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
I lurved the chorus. Great job on that. I think you sat the word "love" too much. Bt, OMG that chorus is just amazing.
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
Beautiful! I could definetly imagine this as a rock ballad - possibly something like My Immortal by Evanescence. Anyhoo I loved this, great chorus! QueenVixta
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Wow, very powerful and chock full of emotion. Vulnerable. This is a great piece.
Keep up the great
| mystery-art chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
aw honey! that is so beautiful... i can really feel the angst... angst, angst is good! smile and the world smiles with you :P
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
love it. just gorgeous and powerful as always.