I adore this story! It's amazing. You have to update as soon as you can ]

whoa. i wasnt expecting dameon to come in this chapter. im holding my breath for the next chapter and i can hardly wait. i liked how you set up the family dinner, it was warm and light and very enjoyable even with crabby aunt lletta.

I like the subject of changing into wolves and all, and the romance just sweetens the deal. Please update soon!

please do update soon its getting really

please do continue ur story even though im only in chap 2 but im sure itsinteresting in the next 4 unique.

About time you updated! Don't be too long with the next one!

I love your story!

i really like this story. keep up the good work. please update soon

hello again, call it loyality, but yah I always keep tabs on those I like. Ah such a solid story, good characters, but as usually I want things to get messy and complicated. Raven;s traits are very relatably, good work!

Howdie! Well, it seems we do have a lot in common, which is pretty darned awsome. thanks for clearing up the whole 'blood child' thing, i was a bit confused. I loved the new chapter! I really like how you alternate POVs and how you wrote Aubrey's character. Good luck with writing the new chapter, hope you update soon!

alright, i think i might have some helpful "criticism". in this chapter you used a lot of "..."s in between emotions and ideas, to get that dramatic effect, and it's fine in the dialouge but i think it's improper english when it's done in the rest of the story; i might be wrong though. english is not my strongest suit but so many "..." looks funny. sorry i cant tell you how to fix it; i feel kinda like a jackass telling you something is wrong and not being able to correct it. :(another thing is that you started a sentence with And. i know that's improper so next time just use a semicolon to connect the two sentences. alright, that's it; thanks for the new chapter! i'm looking forward to when aubrey changes raven; if he ever does. :)

You are a fantastic author, you are fantastic at setting your scenes and keeping the plot fluid. I would honestly judge this work as worthy of bieng published though you need to work on smooth changes in point of view and how much you overlap your characters perspectives of the same events. I look forward to reading the rest of this story, it is a great concept and I hope you finish it.

Aubrey asked who Daemon was...didn't Raven tell him like, a chapter or 2 ago?

I've been meaning to comment for a while now, I don't think I ever got around to it. Very well written, I love the idea of a true soulmate, if only it were real eh? I like it how both Raven and Aubrey understand each other on one level, and yet don't on another. Please end this story happily, I must see these two together!Once again, great writing and please update soon!

This is addicting, positively addicting. I like how you go back and forth between Raven and Aubrey's point of views and tell the same scene or event in both of their POVs, and you do it well. I've found, often, that authors will try to tell the same scene in more than one point of view and it'll turn out repetitive and wont offer the reader any additional information or insight. When you change POVs, you add background and depth to both Raven and Aubrey and show how they are connected spiritually, physically, and connected by the people they know. It makes for a fantastic read.

Eagerly awaiting Chapter Five,Sunne