Reviews for BloodChild |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! _ I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hot dam... er.. i mean dang... yea, hot dang! This story is really good! ya gotta update please? i like how he "sniffed" and smelled her scent1 It was kinda cute! audrey sounds really cute too! Please continue with the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this and am anxious to read more. . . please continue soon. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start, nice and long, i like them that way. keep it up, i can certainly see you love your kick-ass girls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I think that your story is really good. I hope that you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is good, there is a few spelling errors but nothing major. I hope your going to update this story becuse it's awesome and I would love to read more. Keep up the good work. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I do like this chapter ) one suggestion though: it might be better to separate the different points of view, otherwise it does get a little confusing as to whose point of view we're reading. But apart from that, I love it! -wondering what aubrey looks like now- |