| Reviews for BloodChild |
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   clairey chapter 14 . 3/15/2009 plz fininsh the story! |
| MelGrl chapter 1 . 3/6/2009 as i read this story over and over, i never get sick and tired of it. the story is fabulous and awesomely written. i absolutely will be ecstatic once the nxt update is up. i love the way you write. it's so...wow. it completely draws me in. i think you'll become an extraordinary writer. i'll definitely buy your first published book. once again this story is AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! |
| blackrule chapter 14 . 2/20/2009 Just wondering, are you planning on finishing this story? I really would love to see how it ends. I think it is a very good story. As it went on it seems your spelling even got better ;) Can't wait for more from this story. :) |
| QuirkyGurl chapter 14 . 2/14/2009 You ned to continue this! it's so awesome! |
| peacebstill chapter 14 . 12/9/2008 please continue this story. I love it so uch but I am going crazy waiting for the updates! |
| theslykit chapter 14 . 9/14/2008 please update! |
| dreamercrys chapter 14 . 9/12/2008 I love this story! I can't wait to read more... |
| naivete chica chapter 14 . 9/6/2008 oh noo, what happens next? i love aubrey and raven, their chemistry is electric and you describe their kisses/touches perfectly in detail/atmosphere. My only suggestions are that when Raven and Aubrey's mum had a talk about their relationship (and all the other deep talks raven/aubrey had with other characters) seemed too forward. Like they were stating their feelings or advice like an essay.. to me, I'd expect the characters to be more nervous (eg hesitate a bit) or subtle about such personal and meaningful topics. Similarly, when Aubrey first realised Raven was his hembra.. I was surprised that he told Zoe straight away, because I expected him to be a bit confused that she wasn't Loupa, and want to check with parents first.. how to tell if you've found your hembra. It's kind of strange to think of Raven as a senior like me, because she (and even more Zoe) seem a lot older than me lol. Anyway, I can't wait for me. More drama please! I want Aubrey and Raven to have a bit of conflict, as mean as that is, but its exciting and adds to the realism! ) |
| TwilightEclps chapter 14 . 8/27/2008 I love it write more! |
| anon11345 chapter 14 . 7/6/2008 OMG! I love how it took 14 chapters for 3 days to pass. lol. the line "Can i . . . keep you." Sounded straight out of Casper the Friendly Ghost movie when he says that to whats her face! Yes im weird . .. im aware of that. UPDATE SOON! |
| Lalena Cudjoe chapter 14 . 6/19/2008 this is one of the best fics ive ever read on the just period of of the best fics ive ever this was ever published id buy do continue writing. |
| AMM3485 chapter 14 . 6/18/2008 GASP! I absolutely love this story! The pace of romance is great for a supernatural novel, especially werewolves, and the characters are incredible. They rock and you have done an incredible job so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| SpiritOfDark chapter 14 . 6/17/2008 man, whatta place to end a chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting the next update! ~SpiritOfDark |
| HisFiestyBeauty chapter 14 . 6/16/2008 This story is AMAZING! WOW I cant wait for more its killing me! |
| Sweet Child chapter 14 . 6/14/2008 I enjoyed the story so far, and your whole take on the "werewolf" myth. Also, I like the way that Aubrey and Raven are so comfortable around each other. The only thing that I think is dragging out too long is Aubrey telling Raven his secret. I believe that she has been ready to hear it for a long time. Oh, and one last thing. As far as I can see, you don't make any spelling mistakes, but all throughout the story there are typos and some words are missing. So, I'd just advise you to edit your chapters once you finish writing them. Otherwise, all is good. I hope you'll update soon - at least sooner than last time - and that everything will work out with Dameon (gotta' hate the bastard). |