This story is BY FAR one of my favorites on FP, like one of my top threes! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! AH, every chapter I read just sucks me in more and more into the lives of Raven and Aubrey. I must admit, I so didn't see this chapter coming! Now, I'm all full o' questions! What's gonna happen to Raven and Aubrey, what about brother dearest, when (I guess it's more of an if huh?) will stupid ol' Dameon just leave 'em the h3ll alone, and... ah, if I keep going it will take up a whole page! ;). Can't wait to see what twists you come up with next!

Love it!

JustAnotherLibroLover

Oh! Please continue this story! It's really amazing...

This is a really good story. Keep it up and update soon! dun keep me in suspense!:)

*gasps* now I really am on the edge of my seat... what a cliffhanger... I sure hope the next chapter gets up soon :D

no she can't...if she leaves him how will he cope? and what about the alpha match? won't he be to distracted to win?

No! Raven should no better than to listen to evil Dameon. She should talk to Aubrey before she goes off with him! Update soon! :-)

omg I love your story I hope you update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

:) Let's start the update train and get this show on the road.

I don't need to tell you how much I love your characters and your guts to put them in the most difficult situations.

Please tell me that Aubry is not going to fall for that? He will murder that Sob right? He must know how deeply she loves him, he has to know that what she says is an act right? PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!

damn.

... Please write more soon? PLEASE? This is, like, my favorite story on here! I can't wait for the next chapter... How will Raven manage? And I hope Trent'll be ok...

Anywho... Please write more? Soon?

aw... omg.. whatt! uppdate! duude... daemon.. he was a sweet good guy to begin with before his inner beast started taking over right? you should make a soul mate for him.. but like the complete opposite of him.. shy, sweet, innocent kind of girl.. who doesn't even know she's a wolf.. or maybe she could be half a wolf? is that even possible in your story? this is really interesting by the way. i really like it!

"A urethral glow was given off from her skin and hair, making her look every bit the goddess I made her out to be."

Whoops! I think you meant to say "ethereal glow," not "urethral glow." Your urethra connects your bladder to the outside of your body, and I hardly think she was giving off a urethra-like glow.

But great chapter!

Okay...so I officially LOVE your story! I love the interactions between Raven and Aubrey...and I love the way they really seem to be PERFECT for each other.

I wonder if any native Spanish speakers have commented on your choice of word in "hembra." This is only my ninth year studying Spanish, and I've only lived in Mexico for five consecutive weeks, so I am by no means an expert. Not at all. But for some reason, hembra always has a fairly negative connotation to me. I would never call myself an hembra. It's male equivalent, as I'm sure you know (because your Spanish seems natural), is macho, which I always thought of as "stud" in the horse reproduction sense. To me, the term "hembra" means "female," but in the gross, low, women-are-just -here-for-sex sort of way. Sort of like how c*nt in English can turn into a derogatory word for a woman, almost suggesting that she's worth no more than her vagina.

But I really like this story! I just thought I'd comment on something...and I honestly can't think of anything better than "hembra" for the sort of role that you described. )

good story. i like it so far.