well that sucks.

phooey.

her ex is mean :P lol.

I hope Aubrey doesnt get hurt!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Pretty interesting plot, though a bit cliche. Nevertheless, you write well, and I only spotted a couple of grammatical errors. One thing I'm a bit confused about is Raven's ready acceptance of Zoe's telepathic abilities. Does she know that Zoe and Jamie are Loupa-s? Doubt it, but then how is she just accepting it? Also, and this is a bit weird, but I was wondering if you knew the history behind the name 'Ravana'. In Hindu mythology, he's one of the major, and I mean King-of-all-evils-mastermind bad guys. And since I'm Hindu, the name just feels wrong, you know? I just can't associate it with the protagonist. I'm not saying you should change it or anything, just letting you know :)

it's amazing update soon

I love this story... and pathetically would like to beg for an update... 8(

I love that you're taking your time and not rushing the plot. Also that you are very carefully revealing wolven insticts & behaviors a bit each chapter. this is a great story.

This is a very intersting story, and it should be intersting to see where it goes. There are the occasional grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. Overall, the story is very well done. Now, I'm anxious for Aubrey to tell Raven about him being a werewolf. To be honest...she has been around them for so very long that it doesn't seem like it should be that big of a deal for him to tell her. Anyway, until next chapter. Cheers!

GB

YAY! Great chapter. I love love dialouge and character interaction. The character development is great you learn a little bit more about the characters each chapter. Please update again soon.

".. – predatorial and powerful. Aubrey's gate was a bit faster... but things slowed with age."

A 'gate' is like a barrier, something you open, like the gate of a fence.

I think you meant "gait" which is like the way someone walks or runs. ]

Great story so far, by the way ]

I'm so glad you finally got this chapter done... I was starting to think that maybe you weren't going to post anymore... Can't wait to read the next one...

YOU UPDATED! yOU juat totally made my day! er night that is! I wonder how she will react if she actually finds out that hey are werewolves? Eh I love it! Totally and completely love it! hey if you scratch their tummies do they react? WOw that was totally stupid! My question that is. Anyway I hope you Update Soon! I really like the story!

E! I love this! UPDATE!

I totally love this story! I can't wait for you to update! Keep up the awesome work and update soon okay?

Oh... Nice, no, Excellent chapter! This is one my favorite FP.N stories! I can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE write more SOON? PLEASE?

yay! you updated, and a great update. i really love this story and i can't wait for raven to confront aubrey about the werewolf thing and see what happens!