About time you got another chapter out! Very nice by the way...and I love the last line. Update very very soon...please?

Honey, you need to edit. You have some slang phases that need to be revised, it's just some wrong wording, is all.

And some of this is completely unrealistic. I mean, what decent girl talks about an old boyfriend to the current boyfriend? That's just plain bitchy. Never-the-less, talking about an ex-boyfriend who raped and beat her? No, that wouldn't happen. I know Raven's supposed to be strong, but no girl should be that comfortable talking about that subject.

And I understand about the whole special werewolf bonding thing, but two days and already an "I love you"? Wow.

And, jesus, you like to hussle Raven, her rapist ex shows up, threatens her, kidnaps her brother and friend, brother is in a coma and may die, and gets attacked by a teacher.

Anyway, you may definatly have a future writing for soap operas.

i loved the last line. as if he isn't already eating out of the palm of her hand. very nice.

wow.. this is a really nice story.. i love the way where you do not rush things around.. and i also love how you love to write the story from 2 POV in the same page.. it looks really sweet :)

it's really great and i dont mind waiting forever for your update :)

I wonder what will happen if a vampire bit Raven ... would Aubery still love her? xD

Kidding. This is such a great story, it blends sadness and happiness perfectly into a plot. Great work :)

Hey, just letting you know you still have a reader. Great chapter, methinks 3 Got a bit dangerous at that one part though O_o

Awesome... I was just thinking about this story the other day, wondering when it would be updated... imagin my surprise when I got a notice in my mail... Its a rare story that you can pick back up on after several months and still remember the story line, without having to re-read the previous chapter. Your skill and talent astounds... can't wait for Raven to realize the reality of her situation... Update soon! Just because I can pick up on the story line after a long dry spell doesn't mean I want to! LOL

i love this story, but the tension about dameon is getting a bit high! we are all waiting for a big battle or something, and i really want to see raven find out that he's a werewolf...

WHOO HO! You updated! Yay! Hurrah!

LOL... Great chappy, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please please please please please please please please please please please write more soon!

Good over all. I only have a few nitpicks;

'That's the Carmen I know in love' should be 'That's the Carmen I know AND love'

when Raven talks about 'loosing' Aubrey, it should be 'losing' You lose a person, you loosen a knot.

'Leather, chains, sculls; black, silver, and red silk, fishnet tops, and spikes.' Sculls should be Skulls.

“I got tired of the stereotype... and, when I met a girl, she was looking more and what was behind the fishnet than at me or who I was.” There should be no quotation mark after the first 'and' and there should be 'is' between the words 'more' and 'what'

'I had gone strait for the horror movie.' 'strait' spelled like that refers to things like the Bearing Strait. 'Straight' is used in 'straight ahead'

'A single scull gleamed from his ear, a piercing I’d never noticed he’d had.' Once again, use 'skull' instead of 'scull'

... Nothing to report aside from those! Please don't get me wrong, I adore your story and this chapter had some really great character development.

-Grammar Nazi, signing out

What can I really say except that I love this story. Everything bad that happens seems to be balanced out by the love that Raven and Aubrey are sharing, which seems to be how it works in life. Love really is a powerful thing and I think you're doing an excelent job in expressing what all of these characters are going through. Thanks for writing and keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter...

YAY! You updated! I love this chapter.. but it doesn't seem filling to my hunger for more! LOL! Actually I love that.. I can't wait until you update again!

This cheered me up when I'm home sick because of a cold. Thanks! So good!

awsome as always! i can't wait till the next chapter and till he changes her if ever!

Thanks for another great update!