Reviews for BloodChild |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! you have to write some more! what will happen next? i want to read about them winning the Alpha thingy. and possible having pups! Laugh always, me |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok i love bloodchild but pleas tell me that is not how you are going to end the story ? |
![]() ![]() Hey been reading bloodchild for ages just never reviewed. anyways, luv this story! pls update soon...pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter was great! And you updated really quick. I was pleasantly suprised. This story is one of my favourites and one of the best - if not the best - werewolfe stories in here. You have done a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU UPDATED! YOU UPDATED! I came back from a school camp, and was JUST about to start studying for my yearlies [finals]. I was checking my email, and WHAT DO I SEE? 2 BEAUTIFUL chapters up for me to read. *JUMPS FOR JOY!* Thank you thank you thank you. Update again, very very very soon. You will NOT quit this story...I NEED to see the end. *death glares* |
![]() ![]() ![]() SLAPPO~ You update really fast now! O |
![]() ![]() I love this so much. It's hard for me to find a good, unique story out there for me to read-and this one is just fantastic. I love the Latina/Hispanic flair, as a girl learning Spanish its fun to know you can understand most everything they could say. xD And I do get tired of everyone making a deal of French culture. Who wants to eat snails, I ask you? That's right! No one! Especially not me! ... Anyway, on with the compliments. You're a beautiful writer (something that's not too common on sights like this now-a-days) and I will eat your feet off if you don't finish this story. p.s: I have a werewolf story on my profile, too, but it's kind of bad. It was my very first attempt at doing a lot of first-person writing, and it didn't turn out too well. It's kind of old too, and not very good. But I'd rather it all be the same level throughout, so the more recent chapters aren't any better. I might re-write it one day, when I finish writing my fanfiction story. x3 Lovez, Emmalaya |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQUE~ That is all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor Aubrey. Great chapter none the less |
![]() ![]() The latest chapter is quite well written and flows smoothly. I can't help but feel bad for Raven. Sickos apparently flock to her. Thank God that Aubrey's there! Speaking of the two, they're really a great couple. They aren't teh prep n teh emo!1!1!, they're two nice people that life's screwed over and who really need eachother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. It's absolutely amazing. You write really well (but do you really spell "straight" like "strait" in American English? Just wondering...), the plot is great and the characters even better (I love Aubrey and his family, and Raven is great - not to forget the rest of the characters! Trent, the twins, Carmen... Of course, Dameon is disgusting.). The whole set up with the werewolves and bloodchilds and everything is well thought out and realistic - as far as the supernatural goes... :D It was really strange with the new teacher, though. If he was so incredibly hot, why oh why would he want to rape a student - and on the third day of school? Talk about losing your job fast... Of course he didn't think he would get caught, but still. He was scary. I love Aubrey and Raven together. They are too cute to be true. :) Can't wait to read more. This story is so great. I absolutely love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I've said this before but I'm absolutely loving this story... There's a huge part of me that can't wait to find out whats going to happen and how it ends and then theres the other part that doesn't want it to end because that means it's over... I do have a question this time around though, was she only seeing Dameon's face in the teachers because of all the recent events and their past and what was happening to her or is there something more to that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! Yah...I'm still reading. Just letting you know. -Gencons- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad I discovered this story - hope your next update will be soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's getting rather good now, i really like your charcters, even though the idea of wervolves and such is fanasty-like your characters are very real and with depth! i certainly hope you update soon! |