Reviews for BloodChild |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YaY! can't wait for more goodness and interesting things! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Tear' Sad...But I love that yo have uptdated. Beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a rockkin ...update it fast n longer chapter even it is quite long already longer would be nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Raven! At least Aubrey came to her resuce! Gorgeous that one! sigh... Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor raven :( I feel so bad for her. Great chapter though, I loved it. |
![]() ![]() It was amazing...just plain amazing reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I hope you keep updating, and when you do...Ill be back |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfect update soon not like last be a bit faster |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's different then a lot of others i've read. The only thing was that in this chapter you forgot to put the line in where thier point of views changed so that made things a little confussing. I hope you up-date soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU UPDATED! *jumps for joy* Nice chapter...a lot more action than the others but very good nonetheless. Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaay! An update! ... Yeah...that's pretty much it. I read it as soon as I got the email! As long as you know you have readers, you'll keep writing, right? |
![]() ![]() The only flaws I can complain about are the following;*in chapter 1, you accidently used the word 'woe' instead of 'woo'. *Sometime the thoughts are in italics, other times they're in 'quotation marks'.I'm more partial to the italics, myself.*The rape thing is a bit graphic. Beating her was enough to get through that he was an awful person. On the flip side, this story is and Audrey are just plain adorable. Well written and highly romantic- especially considering that they've done nothing dirty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have to compliment you on the progression of your story, just when i find myself wondering about one aspect or another you twist the story and answer my questions... you're keeping me on the edge of my seat and i absolutely cannot wait to read more... keep up the excelent work... |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it, and i wonder if two people could love eachother this much,but i love it. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked the story a lot...pls continue...but m confused a bit...is zoe an wolf or human? |