Reviews for Despair Revised
Lossefalmiel chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
You could end this with just a period if you wanted to...
in theory chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
"Like swallowed tears-" such an outstanding simile. Love it.
Kee.moon.red chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
i love the way you described despair, and what i does to you. and the format helps the poem. good job. hope you got a good grade.
Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
spooky, dark... *shivers*...

awesome writing, you are really skilled!

icewolf9 (13.08)