Reviews for Pony
Spazzy Cow chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Wonderful use of language here. I love the symbolism as well. Very nice job.
Chi Ame chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
I absolutely love the symbolism here. It is brilliant! And I can completely relate to this feeling, you best believe.
M. Smale chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
A very powerful piece of poetry. So unique of a concept with the ice statue pony melting as innocents fades. Keep up the excellent work!
venus-lady87 chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
I now have Kasey Chambers' song stuck in my head. Your poem is amazing, I especially like the second half of the first verse. You, my dear, are the only person I know who could symbolise the loss of innocence with a pony, a frozen pony noe less, and make it work. Still wonderful work, as always.