wow..kinda freaky...you must have been really mad...will u review me?THE HIKE...

You need to get a ence of what you want in this poem what you want to say what you want people to see in there head. If you dont want people to give you thes rev. that say youneed to work on this and this then you need to just put more hart in it I no I sound like a hipacret then I am one of them. O well that is how I am. look at some of mine and juge me!

Haha wow, all because of your little brother? I like your format and the idea was great and so was the wording.
Great job.

The poem is quite good. I must admit I was apprehensive when I read your summary, but this was a good read, in an angsty sort of way.
Just a tip- overusing exclamation points? Bad idea.

Your poetry is very good, I hope things are better with your friends and you little brother. Always cherish them, or they'll be gone tommorow... I know that the hard way.

Wow. Remind me not to tick you off! Great poem though. Very nicely done. Keep writing! :)

i feel that way about a lot of people sometimes. mostly my brothers, but hey, doesn't everybody?

*giggle*

methinks this is overkill considering the situation it was written for, but i really like the poem itself. and can think of a few friends who really f*&%ed with me who'd fit in this prefectly

*slightly crazy grin*

this is a nice poem reminds me of killing my frineds little sister becuase she won't let me call her sister anymore. I understand how u feel

oh... intense. Your friend's little bro made you write this? Ouch! Very good though.

Zozz

Intresting to say the least, reminds me of my feelings for my father.

I think it would be better if you didn't repeated gonna and you're. But it was good

this is exactly as I feel about my brother's friend. He punches me when I'm not looking. He has to die. Hmm, maybe I'll show him this... N E ways, good job *thumbs up*

Hee hee! Thanks for that. My brother was annoying me too so thank ya!

I feel sorry for the people who really piss you odd :) j/k! Good poem

A little agressive are we? Liked it though. _