|Reviews for Shivers Dancing|
| Dark Angel of Destiny chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
wow this is so awesome i love it i love the way the words go together and everthy this is a great piece of work
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
The simplistic diction directs the focus on the emotion, atmosphere, and mood of the poem. It works well in this case. You pulled it off well. The formatting adds to the intended mood as well. Nicely done!
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
Wow, I love this. I can really relate. Written simply, but the subject is powerful enough to make up for it. Great piece, keep up the good work!