Reviews for The Interruption of a Dream
musicwriter2b chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
well earlier i had wrote this extremely long review for you on this, but my computer was an idiot and erased it all. so this one may not be as long, considering i don't remember exactly what i had said in that review, cuz i wrote it like an hour ago. either way, i love the imagery of this poem. i like how u take something so simple as holding your cat, and turn it into a work of art. its awesome. your descriptions, your tone, the way this poem moves along, its really good. i must say that your writing has come so far since the beginning of last year. it was okay then, but now, its like 10 times better, its amazing. the stuff u write now truly moves ppl. its awesome. u have improved so much, its amazing. i wish i could write some of this stuff the way you do. like that essay. i mean, i got a 9 on that little sat essay thing, but ur essay about emily was like so much better than mine. seriously, i love ur writing now. u need to write more so i can read and review it. if u get a chance, can u read some of the stuff u havent reviewed yet, like the next 3 chapters of piece by piece, cuz im having trouble with where it should go, and also several moons away, cuz im stuck on those two.i love your poetry when i get some time, like extended study, im gunna read daisy, since its the only thing i havent read and reviewed of yours as of now, and since i have absolutely no homework to do at this point. laterness,~RKTi love you spatula!
techielovn chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
I really liked this one. I love when people focus on the simple things in life, like holding a cat. Those are the things that make life worth living. And the line "but will continue her journey in the land of Nod" was just amazing.