|Reviews for Hell hath no fury|
| 12345678912356789deletedelete chapter 3 . 11/15/2005
Yah, you wrote more :-)
Ha, the first few lines of this sound like a typical us against friends-who-have-a-crap-taste-in-music kinda argument ;-) eh? Luckily most of our mates like the chili peppers.
I'm enjoying this story, please write more whenever you can, I'm dying to see where this is going. I find the characters really interesting eh...
Lol I love that line of Edens about not knowing what was worse, how she'd hurt her ex in front of all those people, or the hangover...brilliant, sounds like something me or anyone else in our group would say...oh dear alcohol is bad lol. im rambling a bit. keep writing
| Madeline Luca chapter 3 . 11/12/2005
More more more. This is good. Keep going. Write the next chapter before I go crazy with all the study I'm forcing myself to do, I needs something to read :D Need I say more?
| 12345678912356789deletedelete chapter 2 . 11/1/2005
Aha! you knew I would read this eventually didn't you...If you ever say anything to me again along the lines of "I can't write" I'll hurt you, coz you so can. I like this and wanna read more. Finn cheated on Presley didn't he? You need to write more asap ok? Its like TV, one is left wanting to know what's gonna happen next week...Anyway, on a more serious note, you're very good at describing your characters physically, I can picture all of them in my head, but I would like to see more subtle hints about their personality, deep down, ya know? But there is no need to listen to me if you wish. keep writing hun
| Madeline Luca chapter 2 . 10/29/2005
What are you talking about saying its not good? You are totally nuts girl - I like it :D One thing though, this paragraph;“You know Presley’s got a one-track mind,” Alec said scathingly. “Presley, Presley and Presley.” He’d never been a huge fan of Presley. Probably because Presley had never been a fan of Alec. They hated each other its seemed, for no real reason.I know it's meant to say Presley a lot but I think after Alec finishes talking it repeats the name too many that's just me, maybe its meant to be like that :)Anyway other than that its awesome, get your ass working on the next chapter soon k
| orchestra-girl chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
It's really good, it's got really good descriptions, and it makes me want to know what's going to happen next. Update soon! I really want to know what happened with Finn!
| Madeline Luca chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
YAY I FINALLY get to read this story. I like the name lol. It's good, I wanna know more - what did Finn do? I command you to write more : love the names...that I chose :D