|Reviews for Kitten|
| Gemema chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Wow. This all unfolded so well, I didn't even guess the truth until the end! I think you should definately continue on with this. I can see a great story in her character. But anyway, excellent write!
| orchestra-girl chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
I like it a lot, but if she's a model, why do people stare at her with contempt and pity? Do the people know that she is deaf? I think you should add some clarification to the 'This was my choice, and I'll stick by it', does that mean that it was her choice to be a model? Besides a few small things, it was really good, there was good detail, I could picture everything in my head. Update soon!