Reviews for Tweaker
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
woah, I love the honestly. Bitter, beautiful, burning. Awesome .

Anna178 chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
This is really powerful. I dont know what to say about it, except another lame 'I hope your okay," especially when it comes from a stranger.

I can really relate to the ending of this poem.

Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Addictions come, addictions never leave... on the other hand, this poem demonstrates an addiction so realistically that it hurts... definately worrysome.
Spare Change chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
I like it! :) I love the words you used, like "honey-drenched razor". Drugs: Painful yet yummy? In any case, this is a fantastic poem. I must say, you are a born poet.
TheLOVE TheHATE chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
i like this.. you should read mine.
account not in use chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
I love this-it's so honest & real, so genuine.
bjw chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Whoa. The imagery is awesome. "“Late night, laying in the dark/Memorizing/The back of my eyelids", "Ticking/Ticking/Down my throat/Smooth as a honey-drenched razor." It's good! But who is "he"? That part I don't quite understand.. Nevertheless, you certainly captured that dreary resignation in giving in (to drugs) made for a wonderful read. Keep writing!:)
UnfortunateSoul chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
*Hugs ya* I feel ya, sweetness. Good work. Nice imagery, good words and imagination you put into it.