Reviews for Gasoline
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
raining down fire from your eyes... yeah man, that'd rock.

i like... it's differnt... and hear was me thinking it was an arsonists wet dream. lol. nice work.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
excellent concept and execution of the concept. The imagery jumps out at you.
angie3838 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Yikes. This is a disturbing idea. I think more focus could be made on the actual crying part: what it looks like, what it smells like, feels like, etc. This piece would be good to be taken to the next level by centering on the image and writing as much as possible about it as you can; you'll find some interesting metaphors and images coming out.

Also: what would the social implications of this be? Could someone set their home on fire with their tears? Or other PEOPLE on fire?
l337 r0cX3r chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Hm, very interesting. Good visual imagery. Sorry, i'm not the best speller in the world, :). Cool nonetheless.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Ah, it's me... Hello... I like this. Rather abstract, but pertinent. Good. Great wording, I like the lines, "Put to rest/ in the cavernous calls of my unanswered hellos..."

VERY abstract. I like it. _x