|Reviews for gun meta gray|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
I have to say I enjoyed the use of images in this poem. They aren't pleasant images, for the most part, which is refreshing, because a lot of the time, poetry tends to be sappy or flowery (I'm guilty of doing that myself). I agree with Chandra that this has an industrial feel, and everything flows together in that sense. Nice work. I'm putting you on my fave authors list. Keep writing! :)
| Chandra-Moon chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Wow. I really liked this-something about the science-y, industrial-y, cold feel to it. Very interesting, very well written. Good job, favoriting.