Reviews for Suicide Note
Bunnie09 chapter 1 . 4/29/2006
OMFG. IT made me cry, because it reminded me of myself. Bravo. Well done. Truely nice work.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
I find it hard to use rhyme in my poems and find it hard to find poems that do use it effectively and your's is a poem that uses it well. Suicide is a sad way to die but it is also true that sometimes we don't really or ever know a person so it is hurt to believe a person would want to inflict pain and death upon themselves. I too don't always write poems that are necessary about me but just from sayings I've heard or inspiration I have and sometimes it just depends on the mood I'm in.

Disillusioned Traveller chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
The rhythm is a little jumpy and uneven, but overall it's not bad. Keep it up