Ok, lyric writer! I'm jealous. It's very good. Very good. Alot of emotion and alot of people can relate to such a thing and my favorite lines were:

You don’t know what you’ve done,

You love me as a friend

Can’t deal with either one

So I just play pretend,

‘Cause in my dreams

You love me

Basically verse two. Keep up the good work. You're talented.

CK

I adore this song...inspires me. May I use it in the story I am currently writting? (Its called System Error if you'd like to go look. )this makes me...feel..Like I'm seeing a person I love leave forever. Truly beautiful. Well done.

Whoa! I could hear it in my mind like a real song! You should submit it to an artist or something...

Hey. Loved this. It's the first song fictionpress I've ever read, so congrats, you've pushed the interest of checking out other songs people've written. )

You really should try to record this into a file so people can hear it. / I really am interested in hearing how the tuning, rhythm and beat goes.