|Reviews for suicide|
| Nearly There chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I like this too. Very dour and black. Well done.
| Flabbergasted chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
I'm not sure I follow. Are you saying that we commit suicide simply by default because we're destined to one day die?
| agirlnamed-aly chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Power, detailed, and in a way almost cynic with how you describe the way people kill themselves. I don't know if you wanted it to sound that way, but I like it a lot.
| gone since winter chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
this peice is very well-written, and full of great images. the ending was a little disappointing though. the whole poem was serious and full of imagery and the ending didn't really share that feeling. its a great peice though, keep writing.
| simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Crazy. The only good piece on suicide I've ever come across on fictionpress. Virgin Suicides, Sylvia, and The rules of Attraction all wrapped into one.
PS thanks much for the fav!