Reviews for suicide
Nearly There chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
I like this too. Very dour and black. Well done.
Flabbergasted chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
I'm not sure I follow. Are you saying that we commit suicide simply by default because we're destined to one day die?
agirlnamed-aly chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Power, detailed, and in a way almost cynic with how you describe the way people kill themselves. I don't know if you wanted it to sound that way, but I like it a lot.
gone since winter chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
this peice is very well-written, and full of great images. the ending was a little disappointing though. the whole poem was serious and full of imagery and the ending didn't really share that feeling. its a great peice though, keep writing.
simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Crazy. The only good piece on suicide I've ever come across on fictionpress. Virgin Suicides, Sylvia, and The rules of Attraction all wrapped into one.

Great job.

-simpleton

PS thanks much for the fav!