Reviews for Welcome to the House of Madness |
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![]() ![]() hi there! I really like your story... I couldn't stop myself from clicking the "go" for the next page of your story... Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll support this one till the end! |
![]() ![]() Are you going to update this? Or put something in your profile about why you're not updating? Inquiring minds want to know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it drives me insane...your stories. I like them soo damn much. . it's like an overload of funny/cuteness |
![]() ![]() LOL i luv ur plot its soo original and the characters make me laugh soo much. hilarious fic dude alex sounds hott lol please please please please update soon!ahahaha the old fart who was snatching the bag was so funny lol i was cracking up for ages |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I love this story:) O.O it is SOO good. I was worried in the begining that Drew would be hurt when she went with Alex.. because we all knew it was going to happen..but than we have the bestest friend coming in and YAY no sad Drew. I love that now that he has openly told her how he feels he can comment to her all the times he thinks she is beautiful.. or sexy.. I loved the part in the store when he is talking about her pout.. that was so good. I love sexual tension.. it rocks... are you planning on having the jackass of an ex boyfriend come into the story .. like mabye right before they get together.. he will show up and say stuff like how he didnt mean it and he loves her.. Alex comes and is like o hey and you are.. so he leaves but only goes into the next room so he can hear what she is going to say and when she turns the ex boyfriend down he will become defensive and start talking really bad about her... telling her she is ugly all her faults basically. She slaps him he grabs her wrist and is squeezing her.. she is like let go of me.. and he says something dark and tightens his hold and she goes let me go stop it you are hurting me.. Alex comes out and saves the day kicking his sorry ass.. but the guy gets his hits in too.. so later on that night they are in the kitchen her cleaning his wounds.. and its dark only the little light on the stove so its all romanticky kind of and he is like he was lieing your not all those things.. blah blah.. and I would never treat you like that .. you know it. why cant you give us a chance? and she will brake down. he will comfort her.. and while he is holding her whilst her crying he whispers 'I love you' this is all in the future like a couple months from where we are in the story now.. or mabye just one month.. you have to give them time.. you know for him to figure her out.. them spending alot of time together.. getting comforitable with each other and such. but you can totally fall in love when you are just friends.. because its baiscally dating especially when you like like that other person.. just without the physical aspect.. Ok there is my idea.. I am one of those readers that loves to give their view points and ideas.. alot of authors like them and use them but you dont need to feel obligated to use them. you obviously have you own ideas. hence the wonderful story.. :) UPDATE :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fantastic fic. I love the relationship between Meg and Alex - her personality is so complex and varying, but his charm and determination balance her. I particularly praise you for taking the time to develop the romance, as I hate it when authors hurry the plot just to get a couple together. You avoided the trap. Update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I ablosutely love this! I think its really sad that youre not continuing because i am in love with it! Its the only reason i joined fictionpress! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey. awesome story so far. ive been reading it on and off for the last few days and you have me hooked. :P. i really cant wait for more so please update soon! D |
![]() ![]() yayy they are finally together ... well sorta, oh well there are more chapters coming... right? :Pi lolve your story! its great! i laughed my head off the whole time i read it :D it is amasing so far P.S i feel the same ways about mornings :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite stories here. You should keep it going for about 4-5 more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'd forgotten just how damn good this story is. i just got one hell of a reminder! and i agree with the whole 'you can't argue with the eyes' thing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Please UPdatE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's getting really interesting! I LOVE it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTENESS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story! :D 10/10! |