Reviews for Welcome to the House of Madness |
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![]() ![]() i thinks it's 'cue evil laugh' but don't quote me on that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if i have complaned about this before, but i'll do it again. This is a great story, please update, or say that you won't finish it, because i'd love to know what happens to these characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I can see you havent updated for ages so i'm just trying to provide inspiration :D I'm dying to know what happens. Your characters are amzing, plot is awesome and i'm completely in love with Alex. Please think about continuing? - Dannielle :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noo!( |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay then, i was planning on reviewing this story at the end of all the posted chapters but since im so close anyway, why not? i must say that i love this story. very well written and i really like the storyline. i love your characters-all of them. you really did a great job of getting their distinctive personalities out there. nice job. dialogue is something i really enjoy in this story. lots of the really great humour come out in it. i did spot some spelling errors in earlier chapters but i chose to ignore them cause everyone expects spelling errors in a story. though i did see some that were really tugging on my nerves here. they were somewhere around when meg and ree were talking about their childhood meeting-or at least i think it was, i cant really remember. they more looked like typos but at one point i think you forgot an entire word. i think this story flows really great and i commend you on your excellent writing. id like to see were this story goes. keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() though you have so many reviews that i dont know if youll take the time to aknowledge mine, il still review, just because this first chapter was so awesome. so the narration was good. you managed to fit in descriptions of all the people in the house without it hampering the writing at all. good job. the dialogue was also very good-very believable. love your sense of humour. a nice storyline(or what i can see of it so far) that im enjoying. overall, i think its a pretty good first chapter and i hope im not disappointed later on. keep writing:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is soo funny! I couldnt stop laughing! Please Update soon~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gr. UPDATE, DAMN YOU! *sob* Please? Great story, by the way-Dame is a favorite, definitely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it to bits. Alex's so damn sexy. ;) I reckon this has been left aside (date says so clearly), but I just figured i should tell you that if you ever thought of continuing it again, there'll be people here. Hell, I'd love to see this complete! cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BLODDY FREAKING AMAZING! seriously, i never laughed so much. you have an amazing sense of humor. and the quirks are hilarious. lol. i LOVE it. Update soon, M. Angel |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a rockin' awesome story. I always think of Ouran Host Club when you introduce the guys though... dunno why... Anywho! Queue evil laugh? CUE evil laugh. XD Just thought I'd point it out... Keep Writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was reading through this story again and i just wanted to tell you how much i love your writing. im sad that this story has not been updated in awhile but im way down for waiting as long as you promise to finish it lol. anyways just sending you a little reminder that you still have dedicated readers who are patiently waiting for an update :]. hope to see this story alive again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update.. please? ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just reread this story, after I remembered it from all those year ago. Gah, made me so sad. No updates... I'm sorry, I don't want to bug you about it, just want to say how much I love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, you must update. ... Pretty please-y? :D Enough of me begging... I really love this story. I've been reading it at least once a day for the past week, and I can't get enough of it. |